Second Draft
The improvements I planned on making from the first draft have mainly worked this time. I have managed to delete most of the dialogue and add more music into the correct bits as well as adding some sound effects such as the school bell ringing.
Next I have also managed to create my own production company sequence, although not amazing it is different to the others in my group as I didn't want to just have the logo. As well as this I have also added the title and the release date to the end of the film.
Moving on from this draft I only have a few tweaks to make, I need to refine my editing and just make sure everything flows. Then I may add in some frames with the actors name or maybe also include the tagline used on our poster. Using synergy will help link the products for the audience to see them as one piece.
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